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Many people think that to become a successful specialist it's better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. To what extent do you agree with this view? Support your opinion with relevant examples.

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Humans are constantly involved in achieving their dreams to lead a better
life
. To make that happen, everyone
try
Suggestion
tries
 to overrun others in that process. In my opinion, I think that both the cases, deciding about their passion in earlier stages of
life
 and leaving their choices later in the long run, have their corresponding positives and negatives.
To begin
 with, taking sooner decisions about your future is not the criteria, it only counts how best is your choice. As the path taken earlier in
life
 might have few misleads due to the lack of understanding about the topic.
For example
, take the case of kid aspiring to become an astronaut, but making the choice at that stage, where he does not know whether he is having the required skills. They might be having a skill of a classical dancer, which was not recognized and
as a result
, he might not do well in the space as well.
On the contrary
, taking quick career options earlier in
life
 will make you have a head start than others. As the young generations are passionate about it and really wants to achieve it.
For instance
, take the case of a passionate kid for the arts, where he had given the right inputs and training, he could exceed his career and fulfil his dream. So, it would the parent’s responsibility to see, what their kids are really interested. To conclude, I think that without proper guidance about their zeal in a topic could lead to worse decisions, and at the same time, they should be inclined towards what they really want from earlier stages of
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Career longevity
  • Job market dynamics
  • Technological advances
  • Globalization
  • Expertise
  • Adaptability
  • Career advancement
  • Financial stability
  • Job satisfaction
  • Burnout
  • Specialization
  • Fulfilling
  • Personal development
  • Diverse experiences
  • Life events
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