In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion
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, government
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the government
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will be try to work hard to achieve better. Suggestion
no one
Therefore
, this
type of approach is not justified.
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