As a result of deforestation and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There is no scepticism that population of animals is declining due to human activities

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as deforestation and killing animals for their fun. I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

, an issue of saving these living creatures should at the top most priority

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critical problem can be dealt by

combined efforts

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the combined efforts

of

indiviual

a human being

individual

and government. To commence with, protection of these

exticting

presently existing

existing

animals

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is

crucial due to the following reason.

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, their role is imperative to keep

balance

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the balance

of ecology by maintaining our food cycle. Recently,

austrailian

a native or inhabitant of Australia

Australian

bats

has become

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have become

extinct and these bats used to eat all the insects and protect our crops from these insects. After these bats, number of insects

has increased

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have increased

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of which from crops went down by 30%.

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, these animals provide many medicines and other valuable products

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as

horn

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the horn

of

rhino

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a rhino

the rhino

is used in treating human ailments.

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human existence depends upon

these animal

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these animals

and become indispensable part of their life.

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Therefore

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protection of animal is an important issue.

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finding a solution of

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problem is an

ardous

characterized by effort to the point of exhaustion; especially physical effort

arduous

task

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onus

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the onus

is not solely on

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the individual

individual

individuals

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as well as government

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too.One way is that Government should make stringent laws to stop animal hunting.

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, people should be given hard punishment for breaching these laws.Another way to find a solution of

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problem is

afforestaton

the conversion of bare or cultivated land into forest (originally for the purpose of hunting)

afforestation

. People should grow more and more plants so that wild animals can get there home back in

form

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the form

of the forest and their

sustainble

capable of being sustained

sustainable

habitat is very important to keep them alive.By taking these measures we can save them. In conclusion, people are killing animals to

setinate

an unbroken period of time during which you do something

stint

their unnecessary deeds.Protection of these

animal

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animals

is the precedence concern. To solve

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issue need to stop killing animal as a sport and habit of afforestation

shuold

expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

cultivate

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phenomena will

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imminently

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