You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, -Explain that you would like to apply for the job -Give some details of any relevant experience that you have -Specify the days and times that would suit you

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to apply for the position of cashier available at your Mississauga location. My friend Lisha Lokai is working as a Supervisor at your Tim Hortons, Mississauga location, and she informed me that a cashier position is vacant from next week.

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month, I came to Canada as a student for higher studies in a Hotel Management program. Back home, I had experience as a cashier at a food store, where my

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duties were to receive orders, make bills, handle payments from customers etcetera. I'm seeking a part-time

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, and as I have experience in a similar field,

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, I believe

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suits me. As a student, I'm entitled to work for 24 hours a week. My college days are Monday, Tuesday and Thursday.

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, I am available for a full day for the rest days of the week

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Wednesday, Friday, Saturday and Sunday. You can assign me

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hours from any of these days. With

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letter, I've attached my resume as well. Please review my resume, and consider my candidacy for

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position. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Alicia Liberty

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to check your spelling and grammar. There are a few small mistakes that can be fixed.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use more clear topic sentences for each paragraph to help with structure.

task achievement

Expand a bit more on your relevant experience to show why you are a strong candidate.

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The letter is polite and well-structured overall, which is great!

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You provided your availability clearly, that's important for the employer.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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196 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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