Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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There are some arguments about the necessity of travelling; some people agree that travelling abroad is important while others think that
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of travelling, we can stay at home and watch cultural channels to know more that
country
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. In my opinion, these 2 opinions have both specific interesting things, and I cannot say which one is better Staying at home and watching discovery channel is good to gain knowledge. It is true that not every place in the world is safe enough for
travelers
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
, and many areas are too dangerous to
visit
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. As far as I know, Lake Natron in Tanzania, Bermuda Triangle in Atlantic or Mount Sinabung in Indonesia are listed in one of the most dangerous places to
visit
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in the world. So, we cannot directly
visit
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these areas, and we have to discover through
Internet
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the Internet
.
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, it is the fact that people don’t have enough time, money and
health to travel
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health, travel
health travel
around the world until they die.
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, watching television about travelling is a good idea to enjoy the trip indirectly.
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, visiting to a
country
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is as necessary as watching discovery channel at home. There is a proverb which is “A picture worths a thousand words”. That means, finding information on
internet
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the internet
is not enough. Maybe the information on the internet is wrong. We should come directly to that place to confirm whether it is true if possible. And, when we
visit
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to a
country
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, we can try some
specialty
an asset of special worth or utility
speciality
food of each region, which
is never know
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has never known
never knows
the taste through
internet
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the internet
.
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, I believe travelling is one of the best
way
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ways
to relax after a long period of working In conclusion, both directly enjoy the special things in a
country
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and finding information about a
country
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affect well to gain knowledge. To reach the best consequence, travelers should combine two ways together, only choose travelling if the condition is possible
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immersive
  • interactions
  • virtual means
  • cultural nuances
  • language acquisition
  • problem-solving
  • adaptability
  • sustainability
  • virtual tours
  • documentaries
  • sophisticated
  • realistic representations
  • comprehensive understanding
  • financial status
  • carbon footprint
  • digital resources
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