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It is now possible for scientists and tourist to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Countries in the world today are developing rapidly in a short period of time with
advancements
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the advancements
 of technology and travel. Some countries find hard to maintain the pace with other nations with their own national human resource. As a strategy wealthy
countries
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country
allow
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allows
 skilled and knowledgeable migrants to do jobs in their territories. I completely agree with
this
 statement and intend to discuss benefits in
this
 essay. In the modern day younger generation and later, prefer to travel to wealthy countries in order to
up rise
come into existence; take on form or shape
uprise
 their living standards and overcome their difficulties.
Further
, the traveller and the host country
benefits
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benefit
 with these migrations. Some countries are rich with money and physical resources
such
 as gas and
oil but
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oil, but
however lack
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however, lack
 with human power and their knowledge of harvesting. Dominant
countries tempting
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countries, tempting
 skilled and intelligent workers in poor countries by giving rewards
such
 as attracting pay packages and free health care, free schooling for children even
further
such
 as citizenships and
permanent
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permanently
residencies
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Residencies
. After
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to another country the migrant will face some home sickness or cultural
shocks but
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shocks, but
however
 these incidents are able to overcome with time and building relationships with work and the foreign society.
In
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At
 the end of the day the difficulties the migrant
go
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goes
 though in the beginning will be worth comparing to the rewards that follows after. In Conclusion, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
 allowing skilled and intelligent workers
to migrate
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migrate
 to rich
counties
a politically organized body of people under a single government
countries
 is a win-win situation for the traveller and the host country and I believe
this
 a good positive strategy.
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