It is now possible for scientists and tourist to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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Countries in the world today are developing rapidly in a short period of time with

advancements

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the advancements

of technology and travel. Some countries find hard to maintain the pace with other nations with their own national human resource. As a strategy wealthy

countries

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country

allow

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allows

skilled and knowledgeable migrants to do jobs in their territories. I completely agree with

this

statement and intend to discuss benefits in

this

essay. In the modern day younger generation and later, prefer to travel to wealthy countries in order to

up rise

come into existence; take on form or shape

uprise

their living standards and overcome their difficulties.

Further

, the traveller and the host country

benefits

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benefit

with these migrations. Some countries are rich with money and physical resources

such

as gas and

oil but

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oil, but

however lack

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however, lack

with human power and their knowledge of harvesting. Dominant

countries tempting

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countries, tempting

skilled and intelligent workers in poor countries by giving rewards

such

as attracting pay packages and free health care, free schooling for children even

further

such

as citizenships and

permanent

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permanently

residencies

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Residencies

. After

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

to another country the migrant will face some home sickness or cultural

shocks but

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shocks, but

however

these incidents are able to overcome with time and building relationships with work and the foreign society.

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the end of the day the difficulties the migrant

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goes

though in the beginning will be worth comparing to the rewards that follows after. In Conclusion, I pen

down saying

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down, saying

allowing skilled and intelligent workers

to migrate

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migrate

to rich

counties

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

is a win-win situation for the traveller and the host country and I believe

this

a good positive strategy.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourist to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many options. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many parents send their children abroad to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon.

Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.

Some people say that it is individual responsibility to protect the environment while others say it is the government's primary role. discuss both views and give your opinion.