Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Over the past decades, environmental problems have never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. environment is almost inevitable, the final result may not be as expected for long. Some may hold
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the severity and urgency of addressing environmental problems properly are hardly arguable, the issue as to whether governments should deal with these issues with higher price
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the impossibility of achieving the desired goal. Therefore
, increasing fuel prices will not make any significant changes. Secondly
, it is equally important to recognize that there is evidence that waste gas from cars is not the leading cause of air pollution. The opponents may argue that the combustion of fossil fuels by cars is the main producer of carbon dioxide. Nevertheless
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For example
, wind and tidal power in the Netherlands, nuclear power in Japan and solar power in the United States have all proven their efficiency in energy production. This
example indicates that other solutions could be employed in other parts of the world to minimize the global dependence on fossil fuel
. In conclusion, under no circumstances should increasing the price of fuels be taken as the best solution to environmental issues, as it has neglected both the reaction of consumers and the root cause of the problem as mentioned above.Fix the agreement mistake
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion