Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.

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Many people do not know who are situated

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to them.Individuals know only less nearby residents

this

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is because of busy in their work.In my opinion the two major problems of knowing friends are not talking to them and staying at

home

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without going out.The solutions for

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are speaking with the people around you and go to nearby residents.

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more people know less friends because of stress in their job and busy time table.

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, some individuals do think that they are happy with them without speaking to friends.

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additionally

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Additionally

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staying at

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on holidays without going out.Public become more lazy

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selfish and do not help each other.

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this

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all happens because of not knowing the residents.

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moreover people

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Moreover, people

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think they should not talk to them

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sit at

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not interact with the people.

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moreover using

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of phones, playing computer games

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as call of duty

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contra etc.

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the people who knew the nearby neighbours when they come back from their work wants to relax and play some games with them to relieve their stress.

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for

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instance, the person's want to spend weekends and week off with relatives

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friends and

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residents like going out with them

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having fun spending some quality time.Persons become friendly and help each other in hard times.Doing

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way we can be freely in our area by knowing the residents. And maintain good relationship with the friends. In conclusion, I believe more people should know the residents and interact with them which helps in many ways.

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however not

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However, not

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speaking to them and become lazy by staying at

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doing their work does not help.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

community engagement
social isolation
neighborhood watch
local initiatives
virtual interaction
privacy concerns
resident mobility
technological advancements
social media influence
work-life balance
busy personal schedules
community events
local residents
social interaction
community ties

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Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.

Your opinion

Some people believe that children should begin formal learning at school as young as possible. However, others feel that children should not begin school until they are at least seven years old. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

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It is observed that communication between family members in today's time is less as compared to the past. However, some people do not think so. Do you agree or disagree?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion!