Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.

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Introduction: Globalisation is short, the point of the whole effort towards making the international global community act as though they were a single village. Goods that found in western nations can found across the globe.People of one culture, if receptive, tend to see the flaws in their culture and pick up the culture which is more correct or in tune with the times.Cooking styles, language and customs have spread all due to globalisation. In the beginning, the impact of globalisation on business management is seen by the sudden increase of the number of transactions across the borders, though

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they will enlarge their market and enjoy economic facilitates time space compression economics compete at all levels including that of attracting investors.

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, highly educated and wealthy people from different background interact within a westernized milieu.

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, Western styles, since are symbols of affluence and power.

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, the elite often embraces a western style of products and pattern of behaviour in order to impress others. Globalisation is a tool that benefits all sections of mankind. We cannot ignore the negative effects it has in the developing world.

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, it is increasing the cross of higher education,

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Universities and reducing the knowledge gap in developing Nations, it equally has negative aspects which can seriously threaten hose countries.

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, those countries with liberal macroeconomic reforms pursued politics promoting flexible labour markets and employment practices. Conclusion: To conclude, globalisation on its own has a lot of gains and beneficial sites, but due to the influence of some other factors and especially the nature and structure has of most developing nations, it impacts negatively despite the advantages.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten.

Include an introduction and conclusion

lnterviews form the basic selecting criteria for most large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom lo employ and there are other better methods. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

All university students should do some voluntary work to help the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Excessive consumption of sugar causes many health related issues. Some people believe the government should control population’s sugar intake while others think people themselves should be responsible for their sugar eating habits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.