The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966,1986 and 2006

The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966,1986 and 2006
The bar chart compares the proportion giving birth to their first child
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classified
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6 different age groups.
Overall
, there was a downward trend in the percentage of first-time mothers aged 30 or under,
while
women aged 30 and over experienced an adverse pattern. In 1966, the rate of women who were aged from 20 to 24 years old when delivering their first child ranked first, at more than 60%,
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nearly double the ratio of young women who were aged 19 or under, at 35%. Over the
40-year-period
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, both those under 19 or under and between 20 and 24 saw a significant decline, to 37% and 21%, respectively.
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-30 age group grew sharply from 37% to 53% in 1986 before falling noticeably in 2006, to 43%.
It is clear that
the percentage of 30-34s and 34-39s were first-time mothers witnessed a dramatic increase
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the beginning
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the end of the period, from 13% to 47% and from 8% to 30%.
In addition
, mothers aged 40 and above just rose slightly from 2% to 4%.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic changes
  • first-time mothers
  • age bracket
  • fertility rate
  • childbearing age
  • socioeconomic factors
  • educational attainment
  • healthcare advancements
  • family planning
  • societal norms
  • trend analysis
  • delaying motherhood
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