The pie chart below shows the worldwide distribution of private insurance policies.

The pie chart below shows the worldwide distribution of private insurance policies.
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The pie chart compares the four kinds of private
insurance
policies in the world,
while
the table illustrates the policy owned by
country
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the country
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, namely, India, England, and Australia.
Overall
,
insurance
for
auto
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autos
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has a large proportion globally as compared to others as the least,
while
more people in England are insured than in Australia and India. Focusing on the pie chart, it is apparent that auto, health, life, and other(s) are the four types of private
insurance
in the world. Auto
insurance
has the largest share, which accounts for 35% of the total,
while
health and life have 31% and 28%, respectively. Other
insurance
policies have the lowest percentage of only 6%. The table shows that 25% of the people in England have a private
insurance
policy, 10% more than
of
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Australia, and three times more than that
of
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India which is 7%. The majority of Englishmen and Australians have registered for car
insurance
which accounted for 10% and 1.9%, respectively,
while
3.5% of
Indian
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Indians
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considers the importance of health.
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