You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter • describe the item • explain where and when you left it • say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to report the loss of a valuable personal item on one of your trains. The item is a small black leather wallet with the brand name ‘Urban Limit’ embossed on the front. Inside was a library

card

, a credit

card

, a swipe

card

for the gym, a student I.D.

card

and my driver’s licence – all in my name. There was

also

a little cash: about $25 in all. I must have lost the wallet between 4.15 pm and 4.30 pm while travelling southbound on the Wyndham Line on Friday afternoon (15th May). If I recall correctly, I was in the

second

carriage sitting near the front. Could you please let me know if a wallet of

this

description has been found

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My phone number is 099 304 2442. If you have it, please keep it in a safe place and I will make arrangements to collect it at your earliest convenience. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Joe Black

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