The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given tables provide
sales
information on coffee
and bananas
which had Fairtrade
labels attached to them and had been sold in five different countries
in Europe in 1999 and 2004. The sales
price are
given in millions of Euros and the Correct subject-verb agreement
is
fairtrade
coffee
and bananas
indicate that the farmers who produced these products are from developing countries
and have been paid a decent price for their production.
As a general trend, the UK
was the largest market for Fairtrade labelled
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Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
while
Swiss people preferred bananas
of this
category in 2004.
As the table data demonstrates, the market for Fairtrade
labelled coffee
and bananas
witnessed a dramatic increase in 2004 than that of
5 years ago. With regards to Change preposition
apply
coffee
sales
, the highest amount of sales
could be observed in Switzerland in 1999 with exactly 3 million
Euro sale volume. The sale in the UK
in
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this
year was half of that and the lowest sale was recorded in Sweden with less than 1 million
Euro. After 5 years, the sales
of coffee
in these countries
increases
with a remarkable improvement in the Change the verb form
increase
UK
. The sales
went up to 20 million
Euros in the UK
in 2004 with
was almost double Correct your spelling
which
than
the combined Change preposition
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sales
amount in the remaining four countries
.
For the
banana Correct article usage
apply
sales
, Switzerland was the largest market in both years. Sales
amount in the rest of the countries
summed to just over 4 million
while
it was 15 million
alone in Switzerland. The sales
upsurged significantly and went up to 47 million
while
it decreased in Denmark.Submitted by tharukapera55 on
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