The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The given tables provide
sales
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information on
coffee
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and
bananas
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which had
Fairtrade
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labels attached to them and had been sold in five different
countries
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in Europe in 1999 and 2004. The
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price
are
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given in millions of Euros and the
fairtrade
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coffee
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and
bananas
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indicate that the farmers who produced these products are from developing
countries
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and have been paid a decent price for their production. As a general trend, the
UK
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was the largest market for
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Fairtrade labelled
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coffee
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while
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Swiss people preferred
bananas
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of
this
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category in 2004. As the table data demonstrates, the market for
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labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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witnessed a dramatic increase in 2004 than that
of
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5 years ago. With regards to
coffee
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sales
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, the highest amount of
sales
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could be observed in Switzerland in 1999 with exactly 3
million
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Euro sale volume. The sale in the
UK
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in
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this
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year was half of that and the lowest sale was recorded in Sweden with less than 1
million
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Euro. After 5 years, the
sales
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of
coffee
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in these
countries
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increases
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with a remarkable improvement in the
UK
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. The
sales
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went up to 20
million
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Euros in the
UK
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in 2004
with
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was almost double
than
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the combined
sales
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amount in the remaining four
countries
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. For
the
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banana
sales
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, Switzerland was the largest market in both years.
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amount in the rest of the
countries
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summed to just over 4
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while
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it was 15
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alone in Switzerland. The
sales
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upsurged significantly and went up to 47
million
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while
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it decreased in Denmark.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, fairtrade, countries, uk, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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