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Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

#transport #government #people #disagree？
Thanks you for letter in which you wrote to me about your success in sport activities. I glad you continued to build the body of your dream. You want I write you about how I feel in London, and how I am doing here. I like to go
sightseen
going about to look at places of interest
sightseeing
sight-seeing
 often. I
also
 visit a theatre every week.
Last
 week I bought tickets for the tickets at Lyttetlon Theatre. We saw «Romeo and Julliet» actor playing. It was
first time
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the first time
 I went to see a romantic performance. The actors playing was so brilliant! They demonstrated so natural emotion. I liked it a lot because
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
 of the playing was so engaging. I had exciting evening! Hope to hear soon from you!

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