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there are many different type of music in the world today. why do we need music? is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere today?

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Music
 is refreshment for mind, body and soul. It is a great source of entertainment to get relief of anxiety and worries. Now a
days
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day
, There is a variety of
music
 available around us. People
are prefer
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are preferring
prefer
are preferred
 to select a
music
 for their hearing as per their mood which includes both traditional and international
music
. In my opinion, senior
citizens mostly
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citizens, mostly
 interested in hearing traditional
music
 and the
youth mostly
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youth, mostly
 preferred to hear
international
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the international music
music
 more than the traditional
music
. Every
country
 in the world
have
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has
 their own traditional way to present
music
 on
international level
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an international level
. There
is
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are
 a variety of different musical instruments available in the market to have a
rythem
the basic rhythmic unit in a piece of music
rhythm
 of desired
music
. Like all the other fields which are connected to earn financial resources in a
country
,
music
 is
also
 one of the major
source
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sources
 to produce financial resources of a
country
.
Music
 industries
provides
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provide
 a plate-form to many talented people in a
country
 to promote their talent in the form of a singer, musician, composer and
lyrics
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lyric
 writers. So, the more demand of traditional
music
 has in the
country
, the more finance it will earn and the more demand it will get on the international level.
For example
, every
country
 has their own national anthem, which is obviously used to play in the form of
music
 on many international occasions and present a unique recognition to a
country
 for whom it is played.
On the other hand
, the growing trend in our youth of hearing international
music
 which is not
forbidden but
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forbidden, but
 it might be a threat that slowly they are losing their interest and attention from traditional
music
.
Such
 growth in playing and preferring international
music
 may become a big lose of traditional talent of a
country
. I strongly recommend that the traditional
music
 in a
country
should be promote
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should be promoted
 more than the international
music
 to all ages of citizens. In the conclusion, the above discussion is not opposing the international
music
 or the people who prefer to hear
it but
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it, but
 being a part of
tradition
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a tradition
the tradition
 of that
country
 the traditional
music
 should not
ignored
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ignore
 or given the
second
 priority.
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