Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computers. Do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary era, a few individuals deemed that there will no requirement for

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a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

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galleries because everything is available online.I

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, not in favour of

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belief of people. A part of the society

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which consider that

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a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

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galleries are of no longer use, says that everything present on

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the internet

these days

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an individual can search about

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and ancient culture from any corner of the

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world, hence

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, there is no need to pay

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a visit

to any

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a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value

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museums

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gallery.

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, if a person wants to know about the costumes of Harrppa

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he can just google it and a vast number of images will appear on screen in the blink of

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, visits to museums and

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galleries needs a lot of time and money as well since there might be entry tickets and other taxes.Resultantly; visiting museums could never be

convienent

suited to your comfort or purpose or needs

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and pocket -friendly for people. It is easy to comprehend why I

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disagree

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The preponderant reason is that virtual information and images could never compete with the real one. To elaborate more

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in the

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museum

objects are collected from

ancient culture

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ancient cultures

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by seeing them one can understand the

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of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors

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more precisely.Apart from

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, money collected from the

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galleries and museums can be used for noble causes

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as preservance of

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as preserving

as preserving of

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and motivate artists for more creative work.

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, museums and

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galleries are not only necessary for the information about

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and

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culture, but

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for

preservance

keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last

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and for motivation of new

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. In conclusion,

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internet

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the internet

is the great source of information nowadays

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virtual images could not reflect

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as real objects in the museums do.

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, I, firmly, believe that museums and

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galleries provide

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a reflection

history

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and always be the part of society.

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Topic Vocabulary:

virtual tours
digital technology
tactile experience
immersive experience
cultural hubs
educational experiences
digital representations
preservation of art and culture
economic benefits
social benefits
community engagement
accessibility
detail and scale
originals
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