The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The graph illustrates the

percentage

of 4 materials, Glass

containers

,

Paper

and

cardboard

,

Aluminium

cars and

plastics

were recycled in a country over a period of 28 years between 1982 and 2010.

Overall

, Glass

containers

,

Aluminium

containers

,

ever

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and ever

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plastics

percentage

of recycle

shows

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show

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an upward trend,

while

paper

and

cardboard

show a downward trend

also

,

this

figure

was

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fluctuation over the time period.

According to

the graph, the highest proportion of recycled material was

paper

and

cardboard

also

, other materials were under 70% in 1982. Followed by

5

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the 5

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% rate was going up in 1986 but suddenly, the proportion dropped by 65% in 1990.

However

,

percentage

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the percentage

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of

paper

and

cardboard

dramatically raised to 80% in 1994, which was the highest rate of recycled systems. Glass

containers

recycled

percentage

was 50% in 1982 unfortunately

this

figure decreased to 40% in 1990, even

through

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though

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again 10% rise to reach 50% in 1994 which was same as the beginning.

Aluminium

cans and

plastics

had a little bit similar pattern. The

aluminium

recycled system started in 1986 at 10%

also

plastics

recycled system started over 3 years at under 5% in 1990. Both

Aluminium

and Plastic were increased dramatically to reach

at

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nearly 45% and nearly 9%, respectively, even though the

percentage

of

plastics

couldn't

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that couldn't

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recycled

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be recycled

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more

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by more

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than 10% over the time period.