The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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of 4 materials, Glass

containers

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,

Paper

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and

cardboard

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,

Aluminium

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cars and

plastics

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were recycled in a country over a period of 28 years between 1982 and 2010.

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, Glass

containers

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,

Aluminium

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containers

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,

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and ever

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plastics

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percentage

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of recycle

shows

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an upward trend,

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paper

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and

cardboard

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show a downward trend

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,

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figure

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fluctuation over the time period.

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the graph, the highest proportion of recycled material was

paper

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and

cardboard

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also

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, other materials were under 70% in 1982. Followed by

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% rate was going up in 1986 but suddenly, the proportion dropped by 65% in 1990.

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percentage

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of

paper

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and

cardboard

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dramatically raised to 80% in 1994, which was the highest rate of recycled systems. Glass

containers

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recycled

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was 50% in 1982 unfortunately

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figure decreased to 40% in 1990, even

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again 10% rise to reach 50% in 1994 which was same as the beginning.

Aluminium

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cans and

plastics

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had a little bit similar pattern. The

aluminium

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recycled system started in 1986 at 10%

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plastics

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recycled system started over 3 years at under 5% in 1990. Both

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and Plastic were increased dramatically to reach

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nearly 45% and nearly 9%, respectively, even though the

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of

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couldn't

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that couldn't

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recycled

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be recycled

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more

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by more

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than 10% over the time period.