Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house compared with living in an apartment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Hi. My name is Bích, and I’m very happy to have the opportunity To be here and introduce myself to you. I live in a small town called Băc yên. I'm currently in grade 12 at Bach yen high school Where I am being taught by wonderful teachers. My ambition is to become a tourist guide to interact with different people and learn new things from them, So whenever I have free time, I will immerse myself in English Like reading books and listening to Taylor Swift songs. Apart from that, I’m
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fascinated by everything related to Japan. Even though my knowledge of English isn’t great yet, I promise myself to get better every day.
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