1. WHAT MODES OF TRANSPORTATION ARE COMMONLY USED IN YOUR CITY? 2. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE SOME OF THE ADVANTAGES OF BUS TRAVEL? 3. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE SOME DRAWBACKS OF BUS TRAVEL?

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The most common modes of transit in Indonesia include ferries and other ships, as well as a variety of road vehicles, with limited railroad services, and extensive commercial aviation services.
Transportation
is the movement of people or goods from one place to another by using a vehicle
that is
driven by humans or machines. 
Transportation
is divided into 3 lines, including land, water and air
transport
.  One of the land
transportation
that has many advantages is the bus.  By using buses as public
transport
, you can indirectly help support programs to create a clean and healthy environment.  Not only that, using public
transport
also
helps reduce the potential for increased breeze pollution.  As we know, breath pollution has a very bad impact on the natural environment.  One of the effects for human health is bronchitis, pollutant substances contained in the air can enter the body through the respiratory system. Another impact is the destruction of the ozone layer.  The ozone layer in the stratosphere is the natural protector of the earth, which functions to filter ultraviolet B radiation from the sun.  Damage to the ozone layer will increase air temperature on earth and potentially trigger the greenhouse effect. 
In addition
, other programs
such
as reducing the level of congestion
also
benefit from using public
transportation
.  Not only does it reduce congestion, using public
transportation
can
also
save our money. 
This
is because public
transportation
rates are quite cheap and affordable.
Although
it has many benefits, buses
also
have problems like other
transport
in general.  One of the disadvantages of public shipment is the long travel time.  With a very slow travel time, people will think twice about choosing public
transport
,
this
is because humans always prioritize punctuality. In conclusion, if humans want to support the go green program,
then
they should switch to public
transportation even
Accept comma addition
transportation, even
though
this
transportation
still has significant shortcomings.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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