What are the disadvantages and advantages of changing career?

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In the contemporary world, changing careers several times during your growth is being popular.

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, I believe that

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has advantages and disadvantages. Let's start by looking at the advantages.

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you can try yourself in different spheres.

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: let's say you worked as

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manager in the past

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but

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task bored you and you decided to work as an ambassador, you have

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a chance

the chance

to travel around the world.

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by changing work you will meet new people or face other sides of life

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to be exact your communication skills will be broadened.

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, there are some handicaps of working in different spheres. One of the main disadvantages is, instability in

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the appointment

can bring negative effects to your soul.

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: simple things like choosing a dress becomes hard.

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, changing career brings unfinished work that means you will not achieve your tasks till the end. To conclude, there are ups and downs of changing career.In my view, trying yourself in different stint is a very fun experience.

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, it influences in your activity on a bad side too.

Submitted by temirkenzhez on Tue Mar 17 2020

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What are the disadvantages and advantages of changing career?

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where did their training. Others believe they should be freen to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Some parents think that helping their children with homework is a good idea. Others believe children should do their homework on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.