Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some
people
believe that living in a horizontal Use synonyms
city
is the best, Use synonyms
while
the opponents of Linking Words
this
Linking Words
idea
prefer to settle in a vertical Use synonyms
city
. Use synonyms
While
there are benefits to Linking Words
residents
who dwell in a Use synonyms
city
which consists of low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages. On the one hand, it is beneficial for Use synonyms
residents
to live in a horizontal Use synonyms
city
based on a few financial and security reasons. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
people
have to pay less for building services. If Use synonyms
residents
settle in a private Use synonyms
house
, they may save a great deal of money since they won’t have to pay for building services. Use synonyms
Secondly
, living lower to the Linking Words
ground
is safer for inhabitants when emergencies occur. Use synonyms
For example
, if a opponents of Linking Words
this
Linking Words
idea
: opponents are Use synonyms
people
who disagree with an Use synonyms
idea
; they are against an Use synonyms
idea
, a policy or a rule; to settle in: to decide to live in a specific place; to decide to move to an area and stay there based on: to be the reason for something financial and security reasons: financial refers to money issues, like paying fees; security refers to safety, like being safe in your own home in terms of crime or emergencies private Use synonyms
house
: private describes the fact that you own the Use synonyms
house
, and Use synonyms
therefore
you make all decisions about it and pay for repairs and maintenance yourself, versus paying apartment or condo fees lower to the Linking Words
ground
: to be close to the Use synonyms
ground
, which makes it easy to get out in case you need to leave the Use synonyms
house
quickly Use synonyms
due to
an emergency fire starts in the home, they can quickly escape from the dangerous areas because the building is not too high off the Linking Words
ground
and it won’t take much time to leave. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, it seems to me that living in a vertical Linking Words
city
is the best choice. A Use synonyms
city
with skyscrapers will have more space forpublic usage because there will be less land used for residential areas Use synonyms
due to
the amount of Linking Words
people
who can live in high buildings. Use synonyms
As a result
, the government would be able to use Linking Words
this
land to build hospitals, schools or places for entertainment. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it is much more convenientfor Linking Words
residents
to live in an apartment in a tall building which offers a wide range of goods and services, thanks to shopping malls and service centers on lower floors. In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
living in a horizontal Linking Words
city
does have some benefits, it seems to me that the advantages of life in a Use synonyms
city
with skyscrapers makes living in a vertical Use synonyms
city
the better choice.Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion