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People

have to make a lot of choices, even for very simple

thing

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.

For example

, you are hungry, and you want to have some snacks. You enter

into

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a supermarket, and you have too many options to eat. You have to pick one.

Otherwise

, you can gain weight, or maybe you cannot afford all snacks you want to have. I think it is less stressful and less time-consuming

,

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because

otherwise

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you have to think about your choice, you have to think what

this

will bring to you, what

this

will

takes

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.

On the other hand

, if you choose to do the same things every day to avoid

from

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breaking the routine, it can be boring after a

while

, and it is

also

not good for our brain health. Yes,

people

have more choices nowadays.

For example

, in the past, to entertain yourself, you had a limited number of choices,

such

as reading a book or

listening

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a radio station.

However

, now you have an internet connection, computer, television, tablet and so on. So, sometimes it is even hard to decide on what to do in

spare

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times

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because of the number of alternatives. I usually prefer phone applications to contact

with

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my friends,

such

as dm on

twitter

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and

whatsapp

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WhatsApp

Whatsapp

. Yes, I prefer different

communication

ways to get in contact with different

people

.

For example

, if I need to communicate with my professor, I should be more formal, so I cannot send an sms to

this

person. I find

easy

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to keep in contact with my family members and friends, because nowadays we have more options for

communication

than we would ask

, and

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some of them are even free. No, in the past

people

used to use different ways of

communication

,

such

as

letter

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,

fax

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machine

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. Nowadays, it is hard to find a person who sends a letter for

communication

but for only special reasons, or

less

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people

need a fax machine to communicate with others

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because nowadays we have more technological options. I want to talk about the Halloween

party

that I attended. Actually, I don't like to celebrate

the

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Halloween, because it sounds childish to me, but my friend insisted on me

to attend

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the

party

. At first, I was reluctant to attend it, but later I thought it would be an opportunity to spend some time with

people

who

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I haven't seen for a

while

. It was fun. We had some drinks and

a

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chitchat. We even played a board game, and during the

game

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a lot of jokes were made by all,

we

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laughed much. It was

like

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a regular

party

than a Halloween

party

. It was organised by my friend who invited me

at

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her home.