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With a growing world population, one of the most pressing issues is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,

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That is
 a common believe that one of the most important problems with the increasing world population is that of producing foods for a large number of people. As a solution, some human beings have some thoughts that GM foods (genetically modified foods) are valid for these issues. Actually, I disagree with
this
 opinion due to special reasons.
First
 of all, I believe that genetically modified foods are unhealthy for people. GM foods – which is
also
 called as genetically engineered foods – that their structures of DNA are changed by scientists. As GM foods are not beneficial for humans, they cause people have different diseases.
In addition
, their effects may create big problems while the person is not aware of those. One reason behind is
this
 GM foods take part by not allowing people to live longer and healthier.
As a result
 of
this
, it causes the decreasing of human race gradually,
although
 it is said that expanding world population is a trouble on account of feeding them.
Furthermore
, some people think that it is an advantage of GM foods being available in any season. It may facilitate their works,
such
 as a cooking berry cake of berry lover in winter,
however
, it is a fact that eating vegetable or fruit in their own season is much more better than the other one.
Moreover
, genetically modified foods may give bad reactions in person,
for example
, they cause rash on the human body. In conclusion, to my mind the thought of feeding the population with GM foods is not useful at all. People can think
that is
 the best way, but
that is
 exactly the end of the human race itself.

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