Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people regard that many worldwide events
such
as the Olympic Game
or the football World Cup are the best way
to calm down every stress from
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of
country's relationship
and safely promote the national pride.
Personally, I am convinced Suggestion
the country's relationship
this
is true because when people involve to
these physical activities, they Suggestion
in
also
create the environment for competition and bring everyone closer and even emerge the national pride from each person. These may be the main reasons for the above opinion.
Firstly
, regarding to the
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regarding the first
first
reason, competitive environment is always made by every games
, especially sporting occasions because most of kinds of sport require their competitors have to compete with the others. In the past, many ancient kingdoms used to apply Suggestion
game
this
instead
of activating battles in order to reduce the number of death people
. Olympic Suggestion
of death in people
Game
, for instance
, which was born many years ago in Greece, now is the term for every athletes define themselves. Every competitors
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competitor
repersent
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represents
represent
to
the Suggestion
for
in
country
participating in any type of sport listed in the Game
and gaining the medal to
their Suggestion
for
country
. I think this
is quite a good way
to improve themselves and the relationship between nations as well.
Secondly
, the other reason is this
brings everyone and every nation together. The other ingredent
a component of a mixture or compound
ingredient
ingredients
of
these kind of occasions Suggestion
in
are
the audience. They are similar to the athletes because they perhaps come from many different Suggestion
is
places but
when Accept comma addition
places, but
then
join in the event, they select a side which is mostly their home team, representing their nation as well. For example
, the football World Cup is the great occasion for every one
to show how proud they are of their team and their all people
everyone
country
. When they watch sports and encourage their side with the honest spirit, this
gradually emerge
the national pride Suggestion
gradually emerging
gradually emerges
inside
them. Suggestion
in
Thus
, many patriotic emotions will be released in a safe way
.
In addition
, football is well-known as the king of sports due to 2 reasons, one is this
motivate nations take part in the game
and the other one is this
promote member nations. When a national team become
a champion, gaining a kind of Suggestion
becomes
honor
cup, their bestow honor or rewards upon
honour
country
also benefit
by increasing revenue in tourism, economy and so on. Suggestion
also benefits
has also benefited
has also benefitted
is also benefiting
That is
why many people rushing up to these kind of activity rather than creating the wars.
In conlusion
, I believe that international events a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
such
as the World Cup, the Euro Cup or the Olymic Game
are
the best Suggestion
is
way
to ease the tension of international relationship of each country
and promote their nations. They usually state that we will be strong
if we stay together. Suggestion
stronger
Hence
, let us use this
great tool, the sport, so as to connect the world.Submitted by dangvinh1212 on
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