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Some people think advertising is useful for viewers, while other disagree. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #viewers
Nowadays, we can found adve
rtisement in
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an advertisement
the advertisement
every place and every time. We are constantly surrounded by advertising, from television commercials, radio or billboards to posters on the roads. Some people believe, these advertisements are not good for view
er,
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the viewer
viewers
however
 others do not agree.
Firstly
, advertising plays an important role in the economy. Companies need to tell consumers about their products and services. Advertising informs us about the choices we have and the use of the products.
Secondly
, advertising is a creative industry that employs many people,
therefore
 providing jobs
opp
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job
ortunities and income for people. So, without advertising, there would be high
er unemployment rate.
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a higher unemployment rate
For example
, Kellogg’s cornflakes have
a v
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has
ariety of flav
ors for
the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavours
 different ranges to offer for different age groups and now
also
 for people want to lose weight,
thus
 giving consumers different choice to select from.
As a result
, without advertising, we would have fewer choices.
On the other hand
, it is understandable why some people might think that advertising is a negative part of our live
s. On
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life
e problem is that advertisers often aim their marketing at the
young age
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younger
the younger
youngest
the youngest
 groups. Children,
for instance
, can easily be influenced by advertisements. So
this
 put
pre
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puts
ssure on their parents to buy them things by pestering and nagging. Another problem is that many advertisements manipulate people too badly. Capturing the minds of consumers is the main intention of the advertisements.
Thus
by per
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Thus, by
suading people that buying a product will make them happier and with higher social status. In conclusion, the advantage of television advertising makes it by far the most effective advertising medium. Since the marketing industry is very competitive, even the smallest advantage can give a company an edge over its competitors.
Thus
, companies with a large advertising budget undoubtedly prefer television to other forms of advertising media.I
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