Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking for her help. In your letter Explain why your son needs help Ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods And suggest a possible schedule for the lessons.

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Jane, I am writing to ask you if you are available to help my son with some extra English lessons. My son, John, missed out on most of

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term's curriculum due to an unexpected family trip which we all had to be away.

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, he is struggling to catch up with the same stage where other students are at the moment, especially listening and English listening skills. He lacks confidence when asked to speak in front of his class. I would be grateful if you could tell me the methods you use to improve

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pronunciation and listing skills .

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I would like to know more about your teaching experience

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primary school students.

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, which way do you think is better between online teaching and teaching in person? John would be available every weekday after school, so I was hoping that you could teach him in the late afternoon or early evening. Please let me know your availability. I look forward to hearing from you and I hope you'll be able to help. Yours sincerely, Linda

Wed Mar 18 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

182 words

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Your son is learning a second language at school, but he needs some extra lessons. Write a letter to a teacher asking for her help. In your letter Explain why your son needs help Ask the teacher about her teaching experience and methods And suggest a possible schedule for the lessons.

Many people think that the fast food industry is responsible for health problems in society, while others believe that individuals are responsible for their own health. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

The best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write, and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching with the technology available today, there is no justification for it, and everything should be online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? give your own opinion.