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In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Educational establishments have been expanding the demands for learners throughout
years it
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the years, it
the years it
 is lead to increasing children’s burden
from
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of
 childhood. Since
such
 a requests is growing with
years
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the years
 with ambiguous influences on pupils, they grow up more adapted
for
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to
 our world, but majority with problems of health. Inasmuch as, for the time being the educational curriculum should flexibly
adjusts
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adjust
 for innovations to help to study in current conditions;
however
this
 lead to unavoidable increases in
pressure
 on children. Since, we are living in a highly competitive world that demands a certain quality to find a work and each year has been changing technologies.
Thus
, children who have been learning in current conditions could become more stress-resistant, concentrated, competitive and hard-working in the future.
However
, most bother another side of
pressure
; it is problems with mental and physical health. Inasmuch as all people
different
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differently
, especially children, society has ambiguous aftermath
such
 innovation. Whereas one can learn under
pressure
 and develop some resistance and habit
to
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of
 it, others could be broken mentally.
Thus
, all educational establishments should have somebody who adjusts influence on
mental health children
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mental health in children
;
however
 many, today, have nobody.
Moreover
, more and more homework suggests a sedentary style of life that
could be lead
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could lead
could be led
for
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to
 sickness.
For instance
, parents have been complaining about exhausting their children and some time on a problem with the heart disease. To sum up, I believe that today studying
pressure
 has negative progress because need to adjust the educational process, and somebody in educational establishments, for a diminishing harm, should pay attention on children complain, and
then
this
pressure
 will become more positive than negative development.
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