In recent years, pressure on school and university students has been increasing and they are pushed to work very hard from a young age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Educational establishments have been expanding the demands for learners throughout

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the years, it

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is lead to increasing children’s burden

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childhood. Since

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a requests is growing with

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the years

with ambiguous influences on pupils, they grow up more adapted

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our world, but majority with problems of health. Inasmuch as, for the time being the educational curriculum should flexibly

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adjust

for innovations to help to study in current conditions;

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lead to unavoidable increases in

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on children. Since, we are living in a highly competitive world that demands a certain quality to find a work and each year has been changing technologies.

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, children who have been learning in current conditions could become more stress-resistant, concentrated, competitive and hard-working in the future.

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, most bother another side of

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; it is problems with mental and physical health. Inasmuch as all people

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, especially children, society has ambiguous aftermath

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innovation. Whereas one can learn under

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and develop some resistance and habit

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it, others could be broken mentally.

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, all educational establishments should have somebody who adjusts influence on

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mental health in children

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many, today, have nobody.

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, more and more homework suggests a sedentary style of life that

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could lead

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sickness.

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, parents have been complaining about exhausting their children and some time on a problem with the heart disease. To sum up, I believe that today studying

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has negative progress because need to adjust the educational process, and somebody in educational establishments, for a diminishing harm, should pay attention on children complain, and

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pressure

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will become more positive than negative development.