Fewer schools are requiring children to learn and improve their hand writing skills. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this trend?

With the advent of computer technology, several things in the
education
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educational
institutions have changed. A glaring example is
hand
writting
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written
writing
. To be precise, in the past, students were tested on their
hand writing
something written by hand
handwriting
skills, whereas some schools today ignore
this
fact
.
This
phenomenon has, obviously, its pros and cons. I am of the opinion that the merits, outmatch the
shortcomics
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short comics
. On
one
hand
,
this
quality has a beneficial side. The most prominent merit, to my mind, is
time
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the time
. In
fact
, learning how to write
with
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by
hand
, let alone to do well, is not a walk in the park. It demands hard efforts and
time
. Yet,
although
some young students have learnt writing, the outcome is clumsy. The more
akward
causing inconvenience
awkward
it
is the
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is, the
more
time
it demands both for students and tutors.
Furthermore
,
one
other point, equally as advantageous, is the
fact
that students have
one
responsibility
less
tell an untruth; pretend with intent to deceive
lies
in schools.
Therefore
, they could concentrate more on other pursuits,
such
as Maths or History.
On the other
hand
, there is a worrying side, though. The most serious aspect, in my opinion, is the outer image. In
fact
, no matter how well
educated they
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educated, they
are, when they are required to write something, they paint a false picture for
themseves
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
.
For example
, several employers or clients misjudge workers from writing style. Be that as it may, it is something that it plays
negative role
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a negative role
as a
first
impression.
Moreover
,
one
other aspect, every bit as alarming, is the aesthetic factor. Simply put, it is said that the
procces
a particular course of action intended to achieve a result
process
prices
of writing is a science.
For example
, it describes a character or it contributes to
one
’s learning process. So, why someone should not devote
time
to improve their style, which in turn depict things from their
charcter
an imaginary person represented in a work of fiction (play or film or story)
character
charter
? Taking all the aforementioned into account, even though
this
practice
on
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in
at
for
schools has its virtues, it has
also
some anxieties that should never be underestimated. As far as I am concerned, even making allowances for the negatives, the virtues have more things to offer since we live in a
tehnology
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technological
technology
society and school’s
stantards
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
must change with times so that they will generate realistic skills; namely, it seems than keyboard has dominated
hand
, as far as writing is concerned.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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