Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: • tell when and where the presentation will deliver • describe your arrangements • say him/her what equipment you need.

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Hey Tasmina, I hope

this

Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

letter finds you well. I am sorry for

such

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Remove the article

apply

The indefinite article, a, may be redundant when used with the uncountable noun notice in your sentence. Consider removing it.

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short notice, but could not think of anyone else apart from you. I really need your assistance in arranging a pointer for my presentation

this

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week. It is

international

Correct article usage

an international

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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record meeting, and many of the company’s investors and clients would be attending. I am extremely nervous about it, as there are high expectations from me, and

also

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the reputation of the company is on the line. The company has booked an auditorium at the Trump

tower

Change the capitalization

Tower

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, Lower Parel and is on Saturday, the

23st

Change the ending

23rd

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of March 2020. I have been working around the clock. I have finished my project,

although

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I have to still practise. I’ll be the

first

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one to present so there is a lot on my shoulder at the moment. I have kept everything ready, and the only thing missing is a pointer. Since there would be a certain distance from the projector,

that is

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why I’ll be needing the equipment. It will make it incredibly subtle and would be more convenient. I hope you understand and could make the necessary arrangements soon. Regards, Shakib

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: • tell when and where the presentation will deliver • describe your arrangements • say him/her what equipment you need.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

A report indicated that many children between 7 and 11 years old watch television and/or play video games too much. How does the problem affect? What measures can be taken to control it?

Some people think that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people belive that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed nwespapers or books because they will be able to read everything they wnat online without paying. To what extenddo you agree or disagree with this statement.