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Some people believe that secondary or high school students should be taught how to use money management as an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree

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It is an undeniable truth that schools are designed to teach and prepare children for the future, exposing children in subjects
such
 as reading, math, science and more. But other subjects like financial administration must be taught in school level. I completely agree with the given statement and think that
payment
Suggestion
paying
 executive should be included in higher training curriculum.
This
, essay will discuss how it is useful in future and point will be elucidated an ensuing paragraphs.
on
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On
 one side,
firstly
 at present, the key educational goal is to educate students to become highly paid professionals or as workers with higher levels of skills.
This
 allows businesses to have a large pool of
potentially
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potential
 qualified candidates to enter the workforce.
Secondly
, students
deserves
Suggestion
deserve
 more skills like
financial board
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the financial board
 to
equipped
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equip
equipping
 them to escape the rat race. A person with
lack
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a lack
 of practical money management skills has a high potential to suffer from financial stresses in life.
For instance
, an Indian entrepreneur Mukesh Ambani taught his child how to manage
wage
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a wage
 at early life
as a result
 now his child Akash Ambani able to become
successful businessman
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a successful businessman
successful businessmen
. On
other side
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the other side
, sometime providing financial literacy at school cause adverse effect to. If they belong to joint family and other children from same family demanding something and a child have a financial knowledge argue with them an create misunderstanding.
Moreover
, it should not be forgotten that at
early stage
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an early stage
the early stage
 of life because of
this
 type of education student may suffer anxiety and
tence
the time of life between the ages of 12 and 20
teens
. To summarize, early information allows students to learn the importance of earning, investing and developing a healthy relationship with
fund
Suggestion
a fund
the fund
 which leads to becoming a financially responsible adult.
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