Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Society believes that adult is happier than the
teenager
.
However
, I assure that teens get more happiness in
this
activity. In my opinion,
teenager
has inte
Suggestion
the teenager
resting journey and views for
this
life
, but they are spending their time for not useful things like games or social networks.
Moreover
, they do anything to have more exciting lives that differ from adults. On the other view,
teenager
has more
Suggestion
the teenager
a teenager
opportunities for future growth, but adults do not have a chance to changing
their
Suggestion
change
life
. They need to do work that there have to e
nd
Suggestion
has
life
.
Consequently
, adults have boring views of
life
and do anything with negative sides, but they are trying to do anything with productive. In my other view, i think t
h
refers to the speaker or writer
I
at
teenager
has a l
Suggestion
the teenager
ot of time to improving ourselves , but th
ey
Accept space
,
have sat at home and waste their time unnecessary things. In conclusion, teens and adults have same boring and unuseful
life.
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