Recently, it is common for people not to know their neighbours. What is the cause for this problem ? What can be done to solve this problem ?

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It is mostly followed for people not to know their neighbourhood.I concur with the above statement.It is because of not interacting with others doing their work and going to their respective workplaces.
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, it is
main problem
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the main problem
in these days not caring others makes others
also
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uncomfortable with their behaviour.
To begin
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, People will interact with mainly known people and will not interact with unknown people.
Genarally
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Generally
, in villages all the villagers will be interacted like their real relations.
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, we stayed in
khammam
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Khammam
in different areas and nearly we stayed in 6 to 7 houses and now staying in
hyderabad
a city in southern Pakistan on the Indus River
Hyderabad
with more than 1 year, we had not interacted with our neighbours.Like my family me too followed the same way in rentals.
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, It is better to interact with neighbours which makes you feel good and they will help you while going to market or any other place.They can help you
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speak
spoke
with you while you are bored.They will help you to do work in
kitchen
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the kitchen
as well.
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helps you to go for shopping which makes you when you are in
new town
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a new town
the new town
and most important advantage is when you are alone if you are feeling not well they will help you and in any accident they will take you to
hospital
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the hospital
. To conclude, by considering all the above aspects we can solve the problem.
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  • neighbourhood bonds
  • social media connectivity
  • urban lifestyle
  • online relationships
  • fast-paced society
  • privacy concerns
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  • individualism
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