Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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A large number of people believe that precious items in form
of
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the form
gifts and presents to their loved ones is t
he
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are
best while others are of the view that there are several ways to show love. I am of the opinion that showing care through gifts and presents is the best. To start with, presenting valuable materials to people on some occasions
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as birthday and marriage has significant importance.
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, its stre
ngthen the
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strengthens
relationship between
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parties.
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, a husband pres
ent his
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presents
wife with one of the precious item seen in their
last
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visit to a shopping mall on her birthday, thereby creating more
cordial relationship amo
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a more cordial relationship
ng them.
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, it enab
le the
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enables
individual to know that he or she is being loved.
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, rebuilding the trust in
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person.
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, in marriage, it is a sign of love and support to the new couples.
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, building a stronger unity admi
st the
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families.
On the other hand
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, showing affection without presentation of gifts and presents has it o
wn
it is
it's
reasons. Majo
rity of
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The majority
the individuals to be presented with items have
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things in their homes and will not find it appreciative.
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, in some part of Africa, most older parents do not value gifts rather prefer that their children should visit them on several occasions.
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, some people believe that kids only should be gifted. In conclusion, showing love through presents has it o
wn
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
it's
significant
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a form of visitation to show care to others should be encouraged.
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