The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #health #future

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first

priority for human-being.It is f

act

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a fact

the fact

that s

tandard

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the standard

of living is i

ncrease

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increasing

and i

ndividual

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the individual

becomes less

health

conscious day t

oday.

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to day

Some people believe that person's

health

will

decrease

in future.I agree to a large extent with

this

statement.My inclination is justified

further

. In

this

concurrent world, the main reason to support above view is peoples will become more and more busy in upcoming days. I

ndividual

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The individual

An individual

will n

ot able prepare

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not able to prepare

their

food

at home due to his busyness.They will prefer fast-

food

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And

ready-made

food

than the home made

food

This

will lead to bad

health

issues.Convenience

food

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less hygienic than hand - made and its a

ffect

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affected

our some body parts.

For example

, some time high o

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oil, food

food

damage our stomach and leads towards the serious problems like ACDT and bad digestion.

Thus

this

will impact on h

umans

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human

health

Moreover

, In future, people will not take sufficient sleep due to the increasing competition people n

eeds

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need

good money to f

ulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their needs. I

t's

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Its

outcome will b

e stressful

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be a stressful life

life

and sleepless

life

For instance

, person will work overtime to satisfy their n

eed.

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needs

Daily stressful

life

is bad for our

health

Furthermore

, S

ociety

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the Society

has not time for their fitness

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People prefer cars to travel rather than walking or cycling. Some t

ime less

unaffected by time

timeless

walk and yoga h

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have

significant effect on i

ndividuals

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an individual's life

individual's life

the individual's life

individuals' life

individual life

life

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Research on human by WHO s

ays walking

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says, walking

decrease

the obesity problem.

Therefore

this

less walk and less sleep is l

ead

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leading

towards the

health

issues.

On the other hand

, A few people are

health

conscious

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hey are taking care for own

health

by doing exercise,

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alking,

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ating hygienic

food

, follow diet and many other things.By doing all

his things

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these things

this thing

they will stay fit and healthy.

Thus

, awareness of

health

will

decrease

risk of d

ecease.

an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning

disease

So, in n

utshell,

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a nutshell

Health

is w

ealth but

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wealth, but

people i

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are

now a day very busy to f

ulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their dream and forgot to take care about their

health

and individual's

health

will

decrease

due to the their busy timetable, less sleep, more u

nhygienic

food

and less fitness.

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Standard of health
2. Average
3. Lower
4. Future
5. Aging population
6. Chronic diseases
7. Sedentary lifestyle
8. Lack of exercise
9. Poor dietary habits
10. Environmental pollution
11. Technological advancements
12. Impact on health

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