You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to explain the reason why you decline the offer express you gratitude explain you like your current job very much
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my gratitude towards your company
for offering me a job
which I cannot accept at the moment.
I am the candidate to whom your company
has offered the job
of a staff nurse; however
, I cannot accept this
offer. Although
I applied for a job
in your company
two months ago, I joined as a nursing coordinator at Fortis Hospital, Chandigarh last
month. It has been a month that I have been working there, now I do not want to leave that job
in a short period.
I appreciate that your company
offers me a job
with good wages. Not to mention
, this
company
is known for its conducive work environment and co-operative staff members; thereby, most of the people prefer to join your company
.
Despite looking forward to working with your company
in future, I like my current job
which offers me not only to hone my practical skills in the nursing field but also
to provide flexible working hours. Moreover
, my job
includes free medical services and checkups for my family including me. That is
why, I like my job
.
I thank you for your valuable time.
Yours faithfully,
Amandeep KaurSubmitted by immysandhu94 on
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coherence cohesion
While the letter is well-structured and logically organized, consider adding a brief conclusion to reinforce your main points and leave a lasting impression.
task achievement
Your reason for declining the offer and your appreciation for the job offer are clear. However, consider being a bit more specific about why you enjoy your current job, perhaps with examples.
suitable writing tone
The letter uses a polite and respectful tone, suitable for professional correspondence.
logical structure
The structure is clear, with separate paragraphs for each main idea, which enhances readability.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are appropriate for a formal letter.