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1)Damage to environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement in the standard of living. To what degree do you agree or disagree to this position?

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Climate
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 represents a major threat to life on earth. A certain segment argued that we need to accept it rather than try to stop it. I completely disagree with the statement, because I think we still have time to tackle
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 issue and reduce the human impact on the earth's
climate
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 There are myriad measures that governments and individuals could take to prevent or at least mitigate,
climate
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. Governments could introduce laws to limit the carbon dioxide emissions that leads to global warming. They could impose " green taxes " on drivers, airline companies and other polluters and they could invest in renewable energy production from solar, wind and water power. As individuals, we should
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 try to limit our contribution to
climate
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, by becoming more energy efficient, by using bicycles and public transport.
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, prevention and adaptation have to go on simultaneously to balance the
climate
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. Expanding the statements, if
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 of taking the above measures we simply try to
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go away from a place
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. I believe that the consequences will be disastrous. To epitomize, if we use more air-conditioners in the summers
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, these luxuries may cause more pollution and global warming.
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, the rise in temperature may go exponential.
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, over the
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 decade, we have had the highest and the lowest ever recorded temperatures, the worst ever floods, the most devastating Storms
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 hurricanes and tsunamis and many other natural disasters which are the direct result of
climate
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. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that changes in the weather are occurring needs to be controlled.
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, that day is not far, when there will be
litter
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lighter
 or no life on earth.
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