Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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several languages are becoming extinct every year, the situation seems irrelevant to some people. For some, it will be less difficult if there are fewer language in the

world

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. But, since we have lots of different cultures and thoughts, and these differences are described in different languages, it is important preserving all these languages.

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, our

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is comprised of a variety of human races which live in different parts around the globe. Each

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lives

in their own particular places and develop their distinctive civilizations.

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, those cultures derive into words, phrases and becoming languages.

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, the greeting posture both in Thailand and India are the similar, but it is called “Wai” in Thailand and “Namaste” in India.

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gives us the picture of how people in different societies have their own impact on languages.

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, how the language represent the way of life, too.

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, thoughts

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as “Feng Shui” in China or “Bushido” in Japan, are the products from the civilization that has nurtured the society for over centuries.

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, “Feng Shui” is a phrase meaning “Good spirit” in Chinese, and it

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impacts their homes and their way of living. One particular example is Hong Kong, despite being a former British colony, its preserved Chinese values which come from the language has made Hong Kong’s buildings very distinctive and made the city famous of its skyline. So, thoughts and beliefs are represented within the languages.

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, since all those cultures, thought and beliefs which impact on lives in different areas around the

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are all connected with the languages.

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, it is crucial preserving those languages to keep our

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vibrant.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
Digital archiving

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Your opinion

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