Nowadays, people are moving to other countries to seek jobs. Some people think it affects the children of such home negativity while some others think it is beneficial to them. Discuss both sides and state your opinion

It is a common belief that to find a job in a foreign country impacts the kids in a bad way,

however

another belief supports

its

the thing named or in question

it

useful. I will briefly discuss two viewpoints believing by advantages. In the modern life, many people have a better change to life in

more industrial

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most industrial

more industrialized

countries. Because of

this

, they often abandon their raising lands to follow a job opportunity.

Thus

, the children can not

learned

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learn

mother tongue or they can face with some racism from real

rezidents

someone who lives at a particular place for a prolonged period or who was born there

residents

.

Therefore

, it impacts pupils with drawbacks.

On the other hand

, even if kids suffer with some issues, in the future they would have

an

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a

good change

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of

living more modernize locality.

For example

, some student who

have

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has

a scholarship their own governments have studied in the United Kingdom, when they will have

returning

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returned

their neighbourhood with

high

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highly

qualified, it would be great development both of them, including host land.

That is

to say, in

Uk

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the UK

UK

, there are

incredible

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incredibly

high technology devices, learning hubs, libraries with free access for everybody, not only their citizen,

also

the people who come in

ther

in or at that place

there

the

all around the world, particularly underdeveloped ones.

On the other hand

,

whereever

where in the world

wherever

where ever

we are living, we can

exposured

some issues, including our nation.

That is

to say, it is not so significant where you have been, some problems every single time can appear.

For example

,

brutal

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brutalized

children

is

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are

common approximately all

city

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cities

, no matter major cities or small towns. Due to, we should

prevent to

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prevent this

this

situation, all people can be aware and

consciously

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conscious

. In conclusion, I restate that developed western countries have great opportunity all people, so they never give up to move there. In my opinion, the world is getting

small

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smaller

, and all people should

engaged

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engage

to

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in

with

it, so adults should educate their kids who bad-tempered against other ethnic children.

In other words

, living a more modern country has positive effects both sides.