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Most societies has its homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

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Large number
Suggestion
A large number
 of communities have homeless individuals. Several people think the best way that they can be helpful is by giving them
money
, I disagree with
idea
Suggestion
the idea
an idea
.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will discuss why is giving
money
 is not beneficial
secondly
, it will discuss better ways to help. Substance abuse is one of the causes of homelessness. Since addicts are struggling between going to work, paying the bills and their drug problems and because of that
,
Accept space
,
a great deal will lose
there
of them or themselves
their
 house in the process. According to a study done by the Substance Abuse and Mental Health Services in 2016, 36% of homeless people were dependent on alcohol abuse and 31% were abused other drugs. For
this
 reason
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
’m against the idea of giving homeless people
money
, as most would use it
on
Suggestion
for
 buying alcohol or any other type of drugs. And that will aggravate the problem and make the situation worse.
However
, there
are
Suggestion
is
 a lot if ways we can be useful, since most are not apple to work and gain
money
, buying them food, new clothes and if they needs medical care we can
also
 pay for the medical bills. The greatest way we can aid them is by helping them to get back on
there
of them or themselves
their
 feet and that can be done either by paying for the drug rehabilitation
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 and assisting them
in
Suggestion
to
 overcome the drug problem if they have one and support them to find a job and a home to live in. In conclusion, giving
money
 to homeless individuals can
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 them
on
Suggestion
in
 a negative way rather than helping and there
are
Suggestion
is
 a lot of other good approach.
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