Some children find some children some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy too difficult ti learn, so some people argue that those subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a daunting task

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and those subjects should be optional. Personally,

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aspect, there are ample, powerful and daily evidences that learning mathematics

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a mandatory subject

for children; students are more smarter as compare to other nations.

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, despite of hard to learn, if philosophy should be compulsory in primary schools than children would be

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learning

about about moral and ethical values. It tends to

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superior skills not only to create worthy rapport with others,

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despite anything to the contrary (usually following a concession)

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serve for betterment of

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the community

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, some people counter claim that students are more likely to find

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to grasp the knowledge in their earlier years due to they did not have burden of other onus. In conclusion, it can be reiterated

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