Advanced medical treatments are generally expensive. People’s access to proper health care should not depend upon their level of income. All people have the right to access the best medicine available. To what extend do you agree or disagree

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and medical therapy should be handed over to all

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without

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their financial state or the level of salary has been a matter of debate since the beginning of the twenty-first century. In my viewpoint, I agree that individuals

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to have

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equal suitable

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in all

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but I

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think that the idea mentioned above causes several disadvantages for a country.

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with, it is indisputable that all

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should have the same right to receive good

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from the

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. To illustrate, residents have paid taxes to contribute

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their nations, which allows them to have good

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.

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,

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may be willing to pay taxes to earn a good living in the future and the

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should be responsible for protecting people’s lives.

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, there is now an outbreak of the Covid-19 pandemic and the Vietnamese

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is ready to welcome

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to return home for

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and isolation. Another excuse is

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the cost of medicines and other medical

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, the

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class is not able to take treatments.

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, 20% of poor people in India die every year because of insufficient income to pay for the exorbitant

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at the hospital.

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, the

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has even more reasons not to ignore providing good

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for

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considered as a standard of humanitarian.

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, there would be much more pressure

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on the healthcare system if all

indivisuals

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individuals

had access to the most advanced medical treatments.

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because there are many patients who have to wait a lengthy time for their turn. To take the National

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, giving out the same level of

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to every patient is capable of damaging the economy. If the state invests in

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too much, the other fields

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and education will

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from cutbacks and underfunding. To emphasize, spending money on education creates many talented people who are the nation’s vitality and determine the prosperity of a country.

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policy will hinder the development of a nation.

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the right to access the appropriate medicine should be reserved

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any patient regardless of their budget, I believe the

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should cooperate with organizations and

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to provide adequate healthcare to the public for our own int