Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

It is argued that
money
should be spent on developing roads and motorways rather than on public
transport
systems. Personally, I think both thoroughfare and public transportation systems have vital roles to play in modern society, and
therefore
should be equally invested in. On the one hand, better roadway quality increases the level of safety and reduces traffic congestion. In many cities and provinces in Vietnam,
for example
, the number of subway accidents has been ever-increasing because there are a lot of holes on the trail’s surface.
This
is a clear evidence that the government should spend
money
improving the quality of boulevard systems in order to ensure the safety of people.
Additionally
, building wider roads and more motorways in big cities like Ha Chi Minh, where traffic congestion is still a major problem, will help to increase thoroughfare capacity. It means that there will be more space for a larger number of vehicles,
hence
reducing pressure on the city’s main roads as well as congestion.
On the other hand
, better public
transport
systems are beneficial for the environment and people who do not have a private vehicle. In fact, some modes of public
transport
like subways produce less pollutants than cars and other private vehicles.
Therefore
, spending
money
providing people with access to public
transport
will improve air quality and reduce pollution.
Furthermore
, for those who do not have a private vehicle,
such
as motorbike or car, buses and subways are a great choice if they have to travel every day. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirmed the position that,
money
should be well-spent on not only the road but
also
public
transport
systems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Infrastructure
  • Transportation
  • Congestion
  • Economy
  • Carbon emissions
  • Pollution
  • Social inclusion
  • Urban development
  • Efficient
  • Investment
  • Reliance
  • Boosting
  • Affordable
  • Private vehicle users
  • Public transport system
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