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Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labour. Therefore working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In recent years, many countries need the
hand
 workers has been decreased
instead
 of improvements in
automation
 and
technology
. Some people think that because of
this
, that us vital to reduce labour hours. In my idea, working
time
 should be abbreviated. There is no doubt that
technology
 and
automation
 have improved people's lives in many ways.
Initially
, advances in
technology
 and machinery have led people's lives much more comfortable because we have devices and instruments
such
 as mobile phones,
wi
Suggestion
WI
fi
a heavy ductile magnetic metallic element; is silver-white in pure form but readily rusts; used in construction and tools and armament; plays a role in the transport of oxygen by the blood
Fe
 and others. People with those devices can link
with
Suggestion
to
 each others that when and where they are,
may be
by chance
maybe
 in the bank or flat and spend less
time
.
In addition
, in businesses the vitality for
automatio
the act of implementing the control of equipment with advanced technology; usually involving electronic hardware
automation
 devices.
Also
, as a consequence of businessmen or
businessladies
Suggestion
business ladies
 which are doing their work in a greenhouse consume much more
time but
Accept comma addition
time, but
 if they fix the
automation
 devices in a hothouse, they have more free
time
. Turning to the other side of the argument, if we use the
hand
 working, we must pay much salary.
For instance
, in a manufactory that for the sewing dresses, there
hand
 workers are working and are paid much salary if an owner of that manufactory do not utilize the machinery or
technology
instead
 of labours. If we install the
technology
 that our income will be much than before. To sum up, I totally agree with that idea that achievement on
automation
 and abridgement, labour hours due to
hand
 workers separate
time
 to their family, friends, home and others.
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