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In some societies, more and more people choose to live on their own. What are the reasons people choose to do this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

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I am very sorry to inform all you guys that the issue of pandemic
coronavirus
 has been spread all over the world. And Bangladesh is not out of
this
 threat. Due to
coronavirus
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a coronavirus
, all developed
country
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countries
is getting
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are getting
 vulnerable.
However
, as a small country of Bangladesh the virus issue will be more challenging than 1971 as well 1952 even it can be more than 1st and 2nd world war as well. Yields in order to who
(
Accept space
(
world health organization) any time get an announcement emergency in Bangladesh,
as a result
, the school, college UNIVERSITY and any organization will be closed. So that now gets into the major concentration. What is the major concentration? Yes,
that is
 our final exam 2020 the dream of becoming a
Bs
a person who exercises control over workers
boss
.c.
engineer
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Engineer
. I believe that all of
u
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
 guys
are understand
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are understanding
are understood
 what actually I would like to say. Yes, it is an issue of getting early sit for
exam
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the exam
. Anyhow, we have to finish our exam before mid-April. So we should make
agree
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agreeing
to
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with
 the authority of the university and before that we need unity .

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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