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The given picture illustrates
manufacturing process
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the manufacturing process
a manufacturing process
 of plastics recycling overviews which consists of six steps. In general, the process
is begin
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begins
 with
resolding
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 products
on
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in
 the open markets and finishing shipped done product to
partner facility
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a partner facility
 for final processing.
Firstly
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,
plastic
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 is made into new products which are resold on the markets. After than plastics are coming face with
pick-up process
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the pick-up process
 which followed by transported to a
plastic
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 factory to
stored
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store
 in the Warehouse. In fourth step plastics are inspected and sorted by factory workers. After
this
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 point,
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plastic metals
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plastic, metals
 are sent on for
further
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 processing in which there are chopped up into small pieces, washed with biodegradable
soup
a cleansing agent made from the salts of vegetable or animal fats
soap
 and water. The penultimate action is
plastic
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 grind packed for shipment and packed in boxes for
finally
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 way which is shipped
for
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to
from
partner facility
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a partner facility
 for
last
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 processing.
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