The chart below shows the result of a recent survey into the causes of poor school attendance in the UK
The chart illustrates data on the reasons why UK students did not want to go to school based on the present studies.
Overall
, the majority of the student's reason
attributing to poor attendance in an institute is thatFix the agreement mistake
reasons
,
both parents are working, Remove the comma
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however
, upbringing
of the children is less likely to be the problem.
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The attendance
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Attendance
in
university is an important aspect Change preposition
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children's learning and development. Most of the children said that they cannot be present Change preposition
of
in
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the
school because their parents are both working which accounts for almost half of the percentage, at around 40%. Another reason is thatCorrect article usage
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,
students nowadays have a lack of discipline Remove the comma
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that
gathered Correct pronoun usage
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at
25% of the respondents.
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On the other hand
, both contributing factors such
as bullying and pressure from the peer group has approximately 15% of the total tally. The last
reason is that,
students felt that Remove the comma
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upbringing
of their parents and family may be a contributing factor which attributes Correct article usage
the upbringing
for
only 5%.Change preposition
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