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some people believe that artificially intelligent robots will replace all jobs. Discuss your opinion

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There is no
septicism
doubt about the truth of something
scepticism
 that
popularity
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the popularity
 of robots is increasing in many fields.
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therefore
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Therefore
,
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,
some
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
 think that these hi-tech machines will make all jobs
redunded
money returned to a payer
refunded
.In my opinion
,
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,
they can be treated as a complementary help
,
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,
whole work cannot be replaced by them in
coming future
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the coming future
. To commence with
,
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,
it is certainly true that robots
has become
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have become
 indispensable part of human life. It frees us
form
a giver or sender
from
drugery
hard monotonous routine work
drudgery
 of repetitive task and menial jobs that take up
maximun time
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the maximum time
maximum time
 of our life.To elaborate
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,
 there are some extreme conditions where sending human is not possible
such
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 as in fire.
in
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In
 these kind of places robots have proven their ability.
Moreover
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,
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,
 these robots are
emotionless
not in physical motion
motionless
,
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,
 they are able to perform many human operations without
anytremoror
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 in
theitr
of them or themselves
their
 hand like other doctors.
For instance
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, many
eyes
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eye
 operation
are performed
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is performed
 by robots these days.
Hence
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,
this
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 type of development is creating a fear in
people mind
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a person's mind
person's mind
the person's mind
peoples mind
 that these robots will overtake their jobs soon. In my opinion, there is no need to think about its negative
develoment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 because always keep in your mind that these machines are created by humans and all the data feed to them by human beings.
In other words
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, they cannot operate without human instructions.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
Its
it is
it's
It's
 totally in
person's hand
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a person's hand
the person's hand
 how to use them and aware of
thae
definite article
the
 face
taht
pointing out something
that
taught
 where to strike a balance.
peple
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People
Peple
 should use them in
such
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 a way to
maximez
make as big or large as possible
maximize
maximise
 its uses and
elliminated
terminate, end, or take out
eliminate
eliminates
 the negatives related with it.
that
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That
,
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,
s
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
 why,
aall
quantifier; used with either mass or count nouns to indicate the whole number or amount of or every one of a class
all
jobs replacements
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jobs, replacements
 will never happen
by
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with
 robots is not possible at any cost.
in
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In
 conclusion, robots play a significant role in many fields
.
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.
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however
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However
, all jobs cannot be
replced
substitute a person or thing for (another that is broken or inefficient or lost or no longer working or yielding what is expected)
replaced
 by robots solely because
for
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of
 their functioning
,
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,
 they need human help without it
,
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,
 they are nothing.

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