some people believe that artificially intelligent robots will replace all jobs. Discuss your opinion

There is no
septicism
doubt about the truth of something
scepticism
that
popularity
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the popularity
of robots is increasing in many fields.
therefore
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Therefore
,
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,
some
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
think that these hi-tech machines will make all jobs
redunded
money returned to a payer
refunded
.In my opinion
,
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,
they can be treated as a complementary help
,
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,
whole work cannot be replaced by them in
coming future
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the coming future
. To commence with
,
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,
it is certainly true that robots
has become
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have become
indispensable part of human life. It frees us
form
a giver or sender
from
drugery
hard monotonous routine work
drudgery
of repetitive task and menial jobs that take up
maximun time
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the maximum time
maximum time
of our life.To elaborate
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,
there are some extreme conditions where sending human is not possible
such
as in fire.
in
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In
these kind of places robots have proven their ability.
Moreover
,
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,
these robots are
emotionless
not in physical motion
motionless
,
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,
they are able to perform many human operations without
anytremoror
in
theitr
of them or themselves
their
hand like other doctors.
For instance
, many
eyes
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eye
operation
are performed
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is performed
by robots these days.
Hence
,
this
type of development is creating a fear in
people mind
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a person's mind
person's mind
the person's mind
peoples mind
that these robots will overtake their jobs soon. In my opinion, there is no need to think about its negative
develoment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
because always keep in your mind that these machines are created by humans and all the data feed to them by human beings.
In other words
, they cannot operate without human instructions.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
Its
it is
it's
It's
totally in
person's hand
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a person's hand
the person's hand
how to use them and aware of
thae
definite article
the
face
taht
pointing out something
that
taught
where to strike a balance.
peple
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People
Peple
should use them in
such
a way to
maximez
make as big or large as possible
maximize
maximise
its uses and
elliminated
terminate, end, or take out
eliminate
eliminates
the negatives related with it.
that
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That
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,
s
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
why,
aall
quantifier; used with either mass or count nouns to indicate the whole number or amount of or every one of a class
all
jobs replacements
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jobs, replacements
will never happen
by
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with
robots is not possible at any cost.
in
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In
conclusion, robots play a significant role in many fields
.
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.
however
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However
, all jobs cannot be
replced
substitute a person or thing for (another that is broken or inefficient or lost or no longer working or yielding what is expected)
replaced
by robots solely because
for
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of
their functioning
,
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,
they need human help without it
,
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,
they are nothing.
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