You have just been offered a place on a short training course in a small seaside town where a friend of yours is living. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Greet your friend and tell your friend the good news 2. Ask your friend about life in the seaside town 3. Arrange a time to meet your friend before you start the course
Dear Rohit,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to share some good news with you. I am coming to your town next month for the 15-day training course.
As you know, I have been working in the ASI company for the last
5 years and they are sending me for further
training in Quebec. This
opportunity increased my excitement because we never saw each other after finishing college. Also
, my birthday is going on in my course so, we will enjoy ourselves together.
I saw many videos of the area where you are living is so beautiful and attractive. Could you tell me about the current weather conditions which will be easier for packing the clothes? Last
year one of our friends, Sumit shared her experience of a seaside town and told me there is a huge historical museum and some other local attractions.
I am coming on 3rd, September and staying in The Taj Hotel because all the budgets are covered by my company. Let me know when you are free so, we meet last
days before going back. I cannot express my happiness to see you.
I hope to hear a positive response from your side. Can't wait to see you.
Yours lovingly,
AkashSubmitted by harmandeep51075 on
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coherence cohesion
While the overall structure and tone were excellent, consider separating the mention of your birthday into its own sentence for better clarity.
task achievement
Great job on tackling all three bullet points effectively!
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are warm and suitable for a friend.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a logical flow and the ideas are well-organized.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite