Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

It is certainly true that computers are becoming increasingly popular in our education system
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Introducing
computer
in schools aid better understanding of skills and easy
accesibilityof
the quality of being at hand when needed
accessibility
study but
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study, but
there are
also
some disadvantages
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too. On the one hand, one evident benefit is that
computer
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the computer
helps students to improve their reasoning and logical skills. There are several applications available which make tough subject
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including mathematics easier with using different visual and graphical tools.
For example
, Age of Empire is a
beneficial
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benefit
in making complex concepts more understandable.
Secondly
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it is a boom for those students who live in remote areas because they can access these
lesson
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lessons
online anywhere and anytime.These
smatt
showing mental alertness and calculation and resourcefulness
smart
machines make courses easily accessible to everyone
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Recent study
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A recent study
shows that there is an increase of 20% online students.
On the other hand
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there are obvious
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
of use of the
computer
in schools.One issue is that it has brought
threat
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the threat
a threat
to handwriting skills. Pupils do not bother about spelling and vocabulary because these machines
comes
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come
with the
feauturs
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
features
of
autocorrect
which
automattically
in a reflex manner
automatically
correct their
spellings
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spelling
while writing. Another issue of
this
trend is that loss of human interaction. Too much use of
computer
subverted
students
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students'
student
student's
interaction with their teachers.From recent study it is clearly seen that there is
reduction
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a reduction
in the ratio of teachers per student as compared to the past. In conclusion
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while there
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plus point
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a plus point
the plus point
of having computers in classes
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too much would be lost
as a result
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Maintaing
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handwriting skills and importance of teachers in class cannot be neglected in
holistic development
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the holistic development
of
deciplines
a branch of knowledge
discipline
in
classrom
a room in a school where lessons take place
classrooms
classroom
to get attain
maximun
the greatest or most complete or best possible
maximum
from class lessons.
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  • Multimedia resources
  • E-learning platforms
  • Digital literacy
  • Cyberbullying
  • Ergonomic hazards
  • Cognitive overload
  • Technological proficiency
  • Blended learning environments
  • Instructional technology
  • Adaptive software
  • Screen time management
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